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yup, i even remembered that waaay back in second (i think?) will's scene, you as a reader can select an option of licking sam's cum, but will refuses. it's a nice setup for his change of heart (and dick i guess) much later

okay, yeah, sure, i get your point! it also made me remember similar situations with me my friends (not attracted to each other) getting into some action with other people in the same space (under the influence of certain substances, and all of the characters were drunk, so it tracks). thanks for the feedback, it really shed a new light on things! <3 

but with what i will agree — overanalyzing motives of these characters getting involved in sloppy drunk chaotic spontaneous sex is not fair in terms of us (readers) being mere observers, privileged to detach ourselves and think about this situation very thoroughly. as a queer man in a closeted government (russia) i can totally empathize with characters acting stupid in the flame of moment, absorbed by lust and desire. i've been in some very stupid and risky (yet sexy) situations, so i can see why such character as will can become unhinged for a moment. also risk factor may even further the desire and make it more spicyyyyy

personally my problem with todd being included in this spontaneous 4some (sort of) is his personality as a kind of akward goofball, which translated really good with his first scene with sam. both scenes are very spontaneous and i could buy that todd is driven by his curiosity and powerful and more experienced men around him, but imo it's out of character for william to just accept his deputy eating that dick right next to him. it's the most off-putting thing for me, the radical shift of power dynamics between todd and will, kind of OOC? still a very hot scene, don't get me wrong, but it's straaaaange

thanks for writing and amazing artwork! <3

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he wasn't forced into bottoming tho?.. earlier in the chapter he was thinking about giving oral, asking murdoch about it for example, there was thought put into leading to this scene. also it's only blowjob 4 blowjob (kane sucked him too afterwards), so it's kinda fair

oh yeah with this i totally agree, todd thing is absolutely ridiculous... hot on paper but kinda of nowhere

don't get the hate, i thought last will update was awesome

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his contemplation about being a bottom reads plausible, and his eagerness to let loose after all those years (+ alcohol) is believable (to me at least). nice power games from kane, although he is a bastard. and also amazing CGs! 

but besides that, loved the background info on will, love him even more now <3

if you choose math background, when you tell asterion about internet, MC will tel him about online classes and he'll wonder if there are certain sex courses ;) honestly you should check yourself